tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32729511.post8522932320339954747..comments2023-10-23T18:59:38.191+05:30Comments on Mulling Over My Thoughts: What is a Dream?Mulling Over My Thoughtshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06743520508155487647noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32729511.post-57296054852404427882008-12-12T09:01:00.000+05:302008-12-12T09:01:00.000+05:30Don't stop dreaming b'coz there is no wrong in wan...Don't stop dreaming b'coz there is no wrong in wanting something more.:)<BR/>mera tou manna hai:<BR/>Only a fool stops dreaming ;)<BR/>have a nice day !!Sneha Shrivastavahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06238607166316437072noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32729511.post-85879304478482551302008-12-10T13:17:00.000+05:302008-12-10T13:17:00.000+05:30@Crow:> Nah bro, i dont think i wanna change th...@Crow:> Nah bro, i dont think i wanna change the 'can' to 'can't,' it would break away from the pattern of the rest of the poem...a little poetic liberty there, doesn't affect the outcome of the line so better left alone...<BR/>and yes, i think the 'have' needs to be done away with...bad habits die hard, i somehow refuse to use the truncated forms of words...breaks the flow of the poem sometimes though doesnt it? hmmm...note to self: use truncations...<BR/><BR/>@swayam:> hehe...i'm not disputing the role dreams play! it's just my way of expressing the importance of dreams to me! hmmm...note to self: stop being so complicated...Mulling Over My Thoughtshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06743520508155487647noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32729511.post-84463004856428069102008-12-10T09:25:00.000+05:302008-12-10T09:25:00.000+05:30all said and done... I feel dreams are what keeps ...all said and done... I feel dreams are what keeps us going... its the unfulfilled desire which keeps us running... so all in all dreams are good only if don't turn into a paranoia...Chroniclerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11712942770081691145noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32729511.post-13651625618653923442008-12-10T05:02:00.000+05:302008-12-10T05:02:00.000+05:30Okay, I read it aloud and I liked it.some simple s...Okay, I read it aloud and I liked it.<BR/><BR/>some simple suggestions<BR/><BR/>Can you change -<BR/><BR/>Can it just be a little simple? to<BR/>Can't it* <BR/><BR/>(i think you want it to right?)<BR/><BR/>Also the last line to "the only dream <B>I've</B>Writing for Crowshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04756914947211884233noreply@blogger.com