So she says I'm weird...that I dont feel what others do...asked me what I'm jealous of...I gave it much thought and this is the only thing I could think of!
I'm not jealousOf the kinda money you make,
Of all the goodies you rake,
Of all the parties you shake...
I'm not jealous
Of all the riches you enjoy,
Of all your big fancy toys,
Of all your popularity with the girls and boys...
But I am jealous
When to him you do swarm,
Shower him with your wit n charms,
When you melt in his arms...
And I am jealous
That I can give you no more than words like this line,
That I can't keep you for as long as the end of time,
That my love is not enough to make you mine...
10 comments:
Awesome bikram!
very well written!!and isnt jealousy so much a part of us.
woohoo! niiiice!!!
Hey Bikram! This is too good. I wish the ONE who should see it, should see it. And whenever that happens, things will change for the better.
Take care!
Best wishes!
Share when things turn around. They always do; if not try harder until they do. This comes from an experienced practitioner. ;))
wow!!! after a long time I have read a poem like this ( honest and so beautiful )
@Sneha:> Thank you ma'am!
@Ria:> It is! Makes us love each other so much more doesn't it?
@Cutey:> Thank you dearie!
@Kulpreet:> Hahaha...yeah man she did! Unfortunately, she gets too many of these poems to take me seriously now! The curse that comes with the gift! I'm not one to give up easily...there's that eternal hope for change that keeps driving me on.
@Hulosona:> Thanks a lot bro! Wish she'd see the honesty too!
:D
Amongst the stars too, some are brighter than the others.. this is one of them...
Woh... if you arent jealous of all that... you seem almost saint-ly !!!!
@MSA :> Hehehe...thank you sir! It was composed in the serenity of Prithvi Cafe on a very romantic, cloudy day on my last visit to Bomaby! Really miss Bombay sometimes...
@Kriti :> Hahaha! Not saint-ly at all lemme assure you! Those things just aren't high up on my wish-list...I seem to find greater happiness in the smaller joys in life!
me 2... especially the night outs.. that's a BIG minus delhi has...
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