Sunday, November 08, 2009

So she says I'm weird...that I dont feel what others do...asked me what I'm jealous of...I gave it much thought and this is the only thing I could think of!


I'm not jealous
Of the kinda money you make,
Of all the goodies you rake,
Of all the parties you shake...

I'm not jealous
Of all the riches you enjoy,
Of all your big fancy toys,
Of all your popularity with the girls and boys...

But I am jealous
When to him you do swarm,
Shower him with your wit n charms,
When you melt in his arms...

And I am jealous
That I can give you no more than words like this line,
That I can't keep you for as long as the end of time,
That my love is not enough to make you mine...

10 comments:

sneha said...

Awesome bikram!

Ria said...

very well written!!and isnt jealousy so much a part of us.

cute n confused said...

woohoo! niiiice!!!

Kulpreet said...

Hey Bikram! This is too good. I wish the ONE who should see it, should see it. And whenever that happens, things will change for the better.
Take care!
Best wishes!
Share when things turn around. They always do; if not try harder until they do. This comes from an experienced practitioner. ;))

hulosona said...

wow!!! after a long time I have read a poem like this ( honest and so beautiful )

Mulling Over My Thoughts said...

@Sneha:> Thank you ma'am!

@Ria:> It is! Makes us love each other so much more doesn't it?

@Cutey:> Thank you dearie!

@Kulpreet:> Hahaha...yeah man she did! Unfortunately, she gets too many of these poems to take me seriously now! The curse that comes with the gift! I'm not one to give up easily...there's that eternal hope for change that keeps driving me on.

@Hulosona:> Thanks a lot bro! Wish she'd see the honesty too!
:D

M S Ahluwalia said...

Amongst the stars too, some are brighter than the others.. this is one of them...

Bluebutterfly said...

Woh... if you arent jealous of all that... you seem almost saint-ly !!!!

Mulling Over My Thoughts said...

@MSA :> Hehehe...thank you sir! It was composed in the serenity of Prithvi Cafe on a very romantic, cloudy day on my last visit to Bomaby! Really miss Bombay sometimes...

@Kriti :> Hahaha! Not saint-ly at all lemme assure you! Those things just aren't high up on my wish-list...I seem to find greater happiness in the smaller joys in life!

M S Ahluwalia said...

me 2... especially the night outs.. that's a BIG minus delhi has...