Tuesday, July 14, 2009

A lame attempt at poetry in Hindi...

Har zarre mein nazar aata hai unhi ka chehra,
Na jaane kaise bana hai unse yeh rishta itna gehra,
Kaash hum suna paate unhe wo jo jhoomte patton se madhosh jhonka hai keh raha,
Kaash hum unse jata paate machalta hai jo unke khayalon mein, nadaan dil yeh mera...

Everywhere I look, it's just her that I see,
Wonder how such a strong bond with her, came to be,
Wish I could tell her what the naughty breeze whispers, leaving the leaves dancing in glee,
Wish I could tell her how my naive heart flutters, with just her memory...

Yeah, I know...that was pathetic...in my cousin's words, that was as good an attempt as Rosesh's! No more wavering attempts, I promise!


Mulling Over My Thoughts said...

Hehe...someone likes this...I reckon you're just happy I'm not gonna be writing more eh???

Anirudh Tiwari said...

dude! u better stick to english poetry. ;)
Thats your forte. But it was a nice try.

Lost in Translation said...

Hum to khayaal padne walon mein seh hai, lafz or zubaan se koi pharak nahi padta..

BTW I'm quite bored with what I've been doing for the past couple of months so may end up following the links in all those starred emails and reading 'em smtm soon :)


Mulling Over My Thoughts said...

@Anirudh:> Hehe...I know...I shall stick to english!

@Mohan:> Hehehe...do that soon!

cute n confused said...

its not lame, but its not one of ur best either..
try more himdi..dont give up..thr is so much depth in hindi/urdu tht u just cant tap with english..
so wht if it sucks (almost) ;)
it'll get better with time!
so keep at it..
(just dont post it here) :P

Mulling Over My Thoughts said...

@Lehar:> Yeah I know...lotta depth there but my vocab is fairly handicapped as far as hindi and urdu are concerned...won't insult the languages...i dont really end up saying what i wanna very often so i think i'll give all future attempts a rest...

Sneha said...

kya baat hai koi tou shayer ben gayahai.

badiyah hai.:)

Mulling Over My Thoughts said...

@Sneha:> Main shayar nahi...ban hi nahi sakta...shabd aur alfaaz kabhi sahi milte hi nahi...kehna hota hai kuch, keh kuch aur jata hun...

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