Wednesday, January 13, 2010

Walk...Silence...Comfort...

There are days when she just doesn't smile,
Keeps to herself, all the while,
And I wanna know what's troubling her within,
What is it that's gotten under her skin,
But she chooses instead to walk in silence,
Her brows furrowed, her features tense,
Oh how I love it when she talks on without a cause,
But I guess, sometimes, even she needs a pause,
So today we walk, with each other beside,
She doesn't look at me, her tears she hides,
Her hand fumbles as she tries to find mine,
And our walk slows down as our fingers entwine,
To comfort her, I wanna find the right words,
But I know, today, comfort lies, where nothing's spoken and everything's heard...

13 comments:

Sneha said...

I am really short of words to describe the beauty of your thought.

Mulling Over My Thoughts said...

:)
It's the beauty of the emotion she stirs...not of my thoughts...
:)

cute n confused said...

b-eeee-aaa-uuu-t-iii-f-uuu-l!!

Mulling Over My Thoughts said...

:)

hulosona said...

God u r really good at poems!!! hope one of dreams makes to reality.. i guess u will understadn what i am talking about.

Jaynath Sisodiya said...

wooooo.....loved it.....you have given words to my feelings

Mulling Over My Thoughts said...

@Hulosona:> Thank you!
I do hope that I can get that collection of poems published in a few months! Dunno if I'd get rich by it though!
:P

@Jaynath Sisodiya:> Glad you liked it! Thank you for the accolades!

Subodh said...

Awesome, I had something similar penned, but the eloquence of your poetry is stunning ...

Mulling Over My Thoughts said...

Stunning eh?
Hehehe...thank you!

Ria said...

really well written...i love ur poetry coz of its simplicity!!

Mulling Over My Thoughts said...

Thank you Ria!

Bluebutterfly said...

Aww. that was touching really..

Mulling Over My Thoughts said...

Thank you K!