Saturday, January 23, 2010

There's something about distance, that I don't like,
When it's wedged between us, like an unwanted spike,
For when you're gone, I miss you night and day,
Like a part of me, has been taken away,
Far afar, across many seas,
Not hearing your voice, puts my heart at unease,
I like knowing, that you're just a phonecall away,
That just one little sms, will tell you, all I need to say,
I hate being apart, across distant miles,
Even if it is, for just a little while...

7 comments:

cute n confused said...

niiiiceee :)

Ria said...

this is so my state of mind right now!!

Mulling Over My Thoughts said...

@Cutey:> Thank you! It kinda feels incomplete if you don't read it in context though...I'm sure you agree!

@Ria:> I was gonna put this up as a comment on your post but then thought it'd be a bit too narcissistic!
:P

Sneha said...

kaviraj behot hee badiyah.:)

Kulpreet said...

Hey Bikram! With you on this one. Distances are distances; technology can just makes it closer in appearence (maybe thoughts too), but not in the heart. Hope whoever has gone away comes back soon enough.

BTW, Happy new year too! :)

Mulling Over My Thoughts said...

@Sneha:> Thank you ji!

@Kulpreet:> Wish you a happy and prosperous year ahead too!

M S Ahluwalia said...

nice