Wednesday, October 22, 2008

I close my eyes hoping to see you in a dream,
But I don’t, all I see is me by a stream,
I sit on the bank with my feet dipping in,
I twinkle my toes and send the water ripplin,
I thought this was where things happened by my will,
When just a visit could all my emptiness fill,
But I feel the same even though I’m here,
The solitude’s a little too heavy for me to bear,
I wish so much that you’d find me and end my strife,
So that tomorrow I may wake up to the first day of the rest of my life…

10 comments:

KAPPI said...

Oh my God. i loved it. but are u ok?

Mulling Over My Thoughts said...

hehe...
yes dear, i'm ok! couldn't have been better...
:)

Anirudh Tiwari said...

hey i really liked this line
"I twinkle my toes and send the water ripplin"
I could imagine myself doing it :)

Mulling Over My Thoughts said...

wow! nice!
so even you have a nice dream spot like that!
:)

Mahi said...

:)
awww hope she finds u soon n ends ur strife!

Mulling Over My Thoughts said...

lols! me too!!!
:P

Ferrin B said...

awesome!!! you are just so GOOD at this!!

Mulling Over My Thoughts said...

ahhh... thank you!
(me bowing and tipping my hat in acknowledgement!)

i love being the ham i am!

Angie said...

u took the words rite outta me.. hehe.. but sometimes i think this solitude is good... or maybe im jus such a pessimist towards relationships!!

Mulling Over My Thoughts said...

:)
pessimism towards relationships is only temporary...you'll find someone soon enough and move on!
it's part and parcel of life!