Saturday, October 02, 2010

Looking at life through retrospective lenses
I wanna play with time, go back and mend some fences
But foresight then lights up the past in all it's irrelevances
And here I lie in the present, at the edge of reason and the end of my senses...

9 comments:

Punam said...

Nice one.
The rhyming is very good and relevant too.

Ria said...

Oh my that's so apt n well written.

Mulling Over My Thoughts said...

@Punam:> Thank you!

@Ria:> :)

Sneha said...
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Sneha said...

I am trying to understand what you meant by "end of my senses....". Burt the thought is nicely expressed.:)

Mulling Over My Thoughts said...

@Sneha:> Have been struggling to get my head wrapped around the concept of time and life itself. I'm just overwhelmed by the absurdness that is life and the lack of purpose of our lives. Am on the brink of insanity...which is why, "...at the end of my senses!"

Sneha said...

ahh okay.

shootingstar said...

I love the expressing,Its a good effort... :)

Shootingstar was here on your blog.

Mulling Over My Thoughts said...

@Shootingstar:> Thank you!